This is my speech i done it on Tuesday it was fun and i was a little bit nervous but it went really well i did my speech on my little dog she is a puppy the breed of the dog is a Pomeranian chiwawa she is so cute. I would like to work on speaking a bit louder so the audience can hear me clearly.
Kia Ora Simon,
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful speech you done. Please speak a little bit louder so the audience can hear you.
Well done Simon!
Hello simon,
ReplyDeleteI really loved your Speech it was great. But next time could you please speak louder and you did a great work.
Hello Simon.
ReplyDeletegreat speech I just need to tell you next time can you talk louder please.Can you tell me what you were talking about please.And it looked like you did lots of work on that bored.
Morena matey , even though I was there on the day I still had to hear it on the video. Next time just be a little bit louder. What made you have the idea of a dog as your speech? I don't blame you I was nervous to!
ReplyDeleteGood job ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Hello Simon,
ReplyDeletegreat speech I just wanted to tell you that you should talk louder when you are talking. But that's okay. You could ask your teacher if you can say a speech to the hole school. Hope you like my tips.
By Akosita at May Road School